I don't know if it is a good idea to upload a trailer movie to the Flash portal, especially if it's just a low-res video running in an endless loop.
Other than that, looks kind of interesting. For me, the music overpowers the stuff that's happening on the screen because it is so vibrant and powerful.
After watching this, I'm like "that's all"?
Other than a zoom in on a badly drawn pot there is not much to see here.
The animation style does not matter so much to me, but the lack of content does. Next time try to put more effort in before uploading to Newgrounds.
Voice acting could have been better. Even when you have a shitty microphone you can still get some more quality by carefully recording and using filters/volume adjustment, even using free tools like Audacity.
Like sweet21 already noted, the characters should not be transparent.
All in all it feels kind of cheap and the punchline doesn't really get through because of all the little annoyances.
I would like you to read the comments :/
I have said that I didn't intend on too much time being put onto this. I do appreciate the review though :)
Again, I will remake it, voice acting, animation, the jokes, everything, as soon as Adobe doesn't rip me off.
This is great in so many ways! :)
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